Blood at sea.

Blood at Sea

By Luke Stace



It was a cold chilly morning out at the gloomy sea. We were all in our canoes. The people we had in our group were Caleb, Zac, Kurt, Adam, Morgan, and me.

The race was on, through the rocky water to the island where we all stopped to look at the seals.

One of them jumped into the water. When blood floated up to the surface there was fear in all our minds.

Zac said, “It’s just from some fish,” then he jumped in.

We all looked back at the darkened blood puddle with fear, and then we looked back at Zac. He was gone. Then a dismembered hand slowly came up to the surface.

We saw a big shadow moving slowly, deathly frightening.

All the girls started screaming in the other canoe, and then a massive shark fin appeared. It had scratches on its fin and big dark gloomy eyes staring at me. All the people on the other canoe got sucked under like a vacuum cleaner and we all jumped off our rusty canoe because we were worried that we would get pulled under too.

We all tried to swim for our life. We knew we weren’t all going to live. We were all frightened to death.

We swam towards the island and before I could take another breath the shadow of death pulled Kurt under.

Suddenly, Caleb got pulled under, and Morgan. Adam nearly got to the island when, his legs got ripped off. Blood went everywhere.

Finally I reached the rocks and I crawled up on them. I didn’t care about the cuts I got from the rocks. I looked at the rocks and realised my arm was lying on the rocks.
I lay on the warm stones and felt my life slowly drain from my body